Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the progress of science and technology, new media are gradually derived, such as IPTV, e-magazine, etc, which are based on traditional media. Social media applications are the highest used web and mobile applications across the globe. People are spending greater time on their smartphone ever before.
There are several reasons that why people are addicted on the social media and how it useful.
At first, people are natural to be communal animal. We like to be a part of the group, hence social media help us feel that we are participate in the things that are happening around the world.
Furthermore, helping people to build their relationship without the distance and time limit is the most attractive reason why people take a lot of time on the social website. People can interact with each other and find the friends who have been missed a long time since our childhood good friend with living across the border.
On the other hand, social media offer the good platform to the companies and many brands to advertise their products and create their global presences not only helping them to collect customers' data information but also helping them to devote the new marketing model.
To conclude, the social website become to our daily necessities, while the only thing we should to think about it is that how to avoid not to be manipulated by the social media.
- The table below shows the results of surveys in 2005 2010 and 2015 about McGill University Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 50
- Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Many people attend distance learning programs study materials post TV internet and do homework but some people think that this could not be done to the same benefit as those who attend college or universities Agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99145299145 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48109220716 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58547008547 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5950493027 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106601749893 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455471488885 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0171755267095 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572444656102 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162832011308 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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