Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Fast and cheap communication way through Internet without considering the distance is one of the boon of the Internet technology. With this new technology, we have a question which is one more important: expanding transportaion roads or improving access to the Internet for people. I agree with this idea that investing money on the Internet communication is more necessary nowadays and more beneficial. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into my reasons.
First, Internet has made a roboust fondation based on that millions of people's life has improved in a short time. Online access to information through which people are able to do most of their daily jobs and tasks in an easy and efficient way is just one of the visible positive impact of the Internet on our lives. For example, I read an article in an business journal which it elaborate how the Internet has changed the way people communicate, purchase thier stuff, study in college and work remoutly. Just paying attention to the decline in daily commute for this massive number of poeple who they used to do their duties using the cars and roads, clearly show who the importance of the Internet in contemporary life is. As a result, the writer infered that govenments not only will benefit from disbursing money on the Internet ground but also individuals will benefit from this life-changing technology.
Second, the Internet technology helps our invironment by decreasing the need for transportation. The less people travel, the less fossil feul they use in thier cars. Consequently, we will have less green-houses gases in our air which end up have less health problems in people especially in elderly, in addition we need less to spend money in building road for transportation. For instance, many of my colleage who work as a business sellers, are using internet based communication approach to sell their products to their costomers without driving a mile, something that we could not imagine for example ten years ago. The high speed Internet connection through which universities offer online classes is another good example to enforce govenment to allocate more money to Internet projects. Both of these approach decrease the desprate need of travel and roads.
In general, I beleive that govenment have to pay more attention to strenghten the Internt access for businesses and individuals. Having a wonderful Internet fundament helps people to do most of their tasks faster, sheaper and more productive and without transportation. In addition, a well-develop Internet access in community decrease need to use private car and streets which leads to a healthier air quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2225.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16241299304 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91849101528 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515081206497 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7365043294 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.611111111 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218919024179 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727977487456 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042141401996 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144395295017 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186282351828 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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