Many government think that economic progress is their most important goals. Some people, however, think that other sorts of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
According to the statement, most of the legal authorities believe that the most important goal for them is an economic progress while others think that there are other progresses which plays an essential role for a country. According to me, other sorts of progress are more important for a nation and both the views are discussed below.
To begin with, according to legal communities, progress in economy is more important in which funds or money play an essential role. The major reason behind this production and consumption of goods and services which are supplied to citizens. For instance, tourism plays an equal role on the progress of economy of a nation because when tourists visit from foreign country, they pay charges for transportation and for those purposes because of which they visit. These charges are gone into the funds of government in the form of taxes which leads to economic progress.
On contrast, other people think that another sorts of progress are more important as compared to economic progress. Because, these sorts such as education system, medical services, public services and so on, are the major sorts which playa an essential role in the development of a nation. For instance, if education system of a country is well developed and all the children get better education. Then, in future, this will lead to the development of a country because if children will get better job on the basis of their education then they will earn better incomes and will develop their nation indirectly. Moreover, when the facility of medical services is better then this will lead to fall in mortality rate and when death rate decreases then the population of healthy people increases because of better medication. Due to this, more people are able to do work in MNCs or companies or as a labour, so on, which play a major part in the development of a country.
To conclude, according to my point of view, although economic progress is important but other sorts of progress are more important because these play a beneficial role in the development of a nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'economic progress'.
Suggestion: economic progress
...hat the most important goal for them is an economic progress while others think that there are other...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... plays an essential role for a country. According to me, other sorts of progress are more impor...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...he children get better education. Then, in future, this will lead to the development of a...
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Line 3, column 663, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...hen the facility of medical services is better then this will lead to fall in mortality rat...
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Line 3, column 670, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... facility of medical services is better then this will lead to fall in mortality rat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92877492877 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65502915156 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433048433048 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3822553297 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.076923077 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31555024359 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137888024176 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134416107163 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241080277366 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113442673618 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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