The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The aphorism "you can't deceive yourself" could be said to have been coined out of the the reluctant nature of the human minds to come out of their comfort zones whilst yearning for personal development. This sagacious saying is indeed a presentiment associated with the noticeable wrong approaches of individuals that find it difficult to accept their weak traits and become free of their habitual culture to foster developments. The prompt which recommends that the first step to self knowledge is rejection of the familiar is one I strongly agree with for two reasons.
To begin with, development cannot be attained and sustained without taking the bold step of truncating the past ways -that have not yield propitious circumstances- on the basis of the fear of the future consequences. For instance, Africa has long been identified with myriads of challenges (ranging from insecurity, poverty, poor infrastructures and many more) that have become perennial in the continent and it appears that the only way is to go to the past and correct the wrongs. While Africa problems seems inexorable, it has been further convoluted by the inability of the leaders and residents to accept their familiar unwholesome lifestyle must be repudiated to enhance development. Some have even misinterpreted these perennial problems as endemic to African culture. It is therefore not surprising that various leaders have claimed to revolutionize the continent but the image presented to the world still remains besieged. The example above illustrates that tolerating the current problematic circumstances of humans with the fear of taking a radical change by ending one's inveterate culture will not create a paradigm shift to a noticeable development in one's self.
In furtherance, there is a need to accept that "In dreams begin responsibilities". In other words, to attain one's desire and passion, one must be able to accept responsibilities that largely depend on an individual discipline to think and go beyond the norm. Undoubtedly, the competitive nature of the world has made humans accept the trends to ascertain their survival. It is however paradoxical to see oneself uncomfortably positioned in a work environment that is not in tandem with one's passion. For example, in the early 19th century, the world parochially believed that air flight is an impossibility. The Wright brothers however rejected this benighted beliefs and challenged themselves to align with their passion in causing a radical change to the world's transportation mechanism. In fact, most of the revolutionary inventions are made by great minds that have the needed discipline and determination to reject the norm with a prescience to creating a better world in which everyone will live in peace and shared prosperity. This illustration affirmed that the inconceivable developmental changes that the world have witnessed were as a result of the ability to reject the past and accept one's knowledge and belief in creating the change one desires.
However, the rejection of the familiar might threaten one's culture if not properly preserved. There are developmental changes that have changed the cultural tenets established by our forefathers. Nevertheless, looking at the effects and the amalgam of traditional changes to one's invention around; it is no gainsaying that the tactful rejection of the familiar is the first and much needed step to create the change one desire.
As such, the recommendation given by the prompt is valid and essential to realizing one's status quo which would subsequently give the chance for future developments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ould be said to have been coined out of the the reluctant nature of the human minds to ...
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Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ould be said to have been coined out of the the reluctant nature of the human minds to ...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'yielded'.
Suggestion: yielded
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3069.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 571.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37478108581 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18437724426 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514886164623 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 963.9 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2400760294 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.142857143 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1904761905 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167810723879 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506368125899 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677706501326 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979417090413 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471211151988 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 165.0 100.480337079 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.