The government has decided to build a factory in your community .agree or not
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of factory construction in a community. Some people consider only the disadvantages of construction in society, whereas others take it as an opportunity for a myriad of reasons. I wholeheartedly support the establishment of a factory in my town because the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I will explore the reasons for this choice in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, developing industry will provide the opportunity of employments to town dwellers which gradually reduces the other associated problems. Because of unemployment, young generations indulge themselves in many crimes to fulfill their financial needs and raise their living standards. Starting a new company would provide the youngsters with jobs, and therefore crime ratio in the community will be declined too. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience in my city. Two years ago, my town has a high ratio of crimes, convicted by young unemployed people. Then, the textile industry is started in my city which gave the chances of employment to many young people. As a result, this year the crime ratio is significantly reduced. If a new company had not provided people with jobs, it would have never been possible to reduce the crimes in my town.
Secondly, the factory will results in huge revenue for the government which they can use in starting other construction projects. People will naturally attract to the commodities of the factory, resulting in huge sales and profit for the company, and the government can use that revenue to start new projects in society. Drawing from my own experience, the government constructed a textile factory in my town two years ago. The profit was so immense that the following year, authorities passed the bill to build a new department in the local university in my town Moreover, it also aids in improvements of financial conditions of the town. It is certainly clear to see why it’s so important to build a new company to have better financial revenue.
Lastly, people will initiate new interactions and relationships with neighboring cities after a new factory starts its operation. This is because, when the factory is established, it will attract the public of nearby cities, and they might want to build their relations with the people of the town. Thus, the social circle of people living in town would be broadened.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that the factory building project will not only provide the people with employment opportunities, but it will also amplify the city revenue. Moreover, it strengthens the relationship with nearby communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
... my town. Secondly, the factory will results in huge revenue for the government whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18018018018 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01995702133 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495495495495 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5406800519 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11162508207 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346832178899 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386834540255 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071883271714 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381300067587 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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