What is the best way to stay healthy?explain with reasons
With the advent of technology, it's not hard for people to find ways to stay healthy. Some people choose to improve their health by doing proper exercise, while others choose to eat a completely healthy diet. If I was asked, I would choose to eat a complete nutritional meal to stay healthy.
To begin with, taking a complete nutritional diet prevents a person from obesity, which is the root cause of many other diseases. if a person relay wants to keep himself away from obesity, he should start looking for his ideal BMI and removes high caloric food and fats from his diet. Moreover, obesity leads to many other diseases such as blood pressure, cardiac arrest, and depression. Research has proven that people who eat healthily and take full nutrition, prove to live long and are less prone to ailments. Whereas people who do not take care of their diet and include high caloric and junk food tend to increase weight and suffer in related illnesses. The example that came to my mind to elucidate my standpoint is that last year my grandfather passed away at the age of 85 he was completely healthy and energetic and had not been diagnosed with any disease. The secret to his long healthy life was that he ate a proper well-balanced meal. On the contrary, I am 30, but because of the reason that I do not eat healthily and eat junk, I steered to get obese from a young age. It is clear to see that healthy eating habit is crucial for a healthy lifestyle
The second rationale behind my choice is the fact that a well-balanced and nutritional meal provides energy to a person which is crucial for his daily performance and other life activities. A meal without complete nutrition makes the person lethargic and weak and, as a result, he cannot concentrate on his work. Moreover, a healthy and energetic body is essential for a sound mind. My example is a compelling example of this. Last year, I was living in a hostel therefore I could not concentrate on my diet and could not fulfill my daily calorie requirement. As a result, I started to feel lethargic and couldn't focus on my studies, and failed my exam because of incomplete attention. If I had taken a healthy nutritional diet, I would have not failed the exam.
In the light of the above-mentioned reasons, I completely believe that eating healthy is the most critical factor for healthy life but because it prevents obesity, but also it provides us energy which acts as a fuel in our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63532110092 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63945587911 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493119266055 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4787773553 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.368421053 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123111783928 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408269372229 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046134624006 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843946270635 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041740800079 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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