It is widely excepted that in many countries that days some people
It is widely excepted that in many countries that days some people earn extremely high salaries. Many people proclaim that it is a benefit for the country, while others believe that it is not allowed to earn above a certain level. It seems to me that, earning more money is benefit for everyone and it is allowed in each country.
Firstly, in my point of view, all people which are working for on a daily basis without relax, they are working for their family or for themselves. They should feed their family, maybe they need to a salary, however people who works for themselves want to create something or to become famous person. Although it is generally considered that people who were used to earn money from their childhood, they become businessman or they live without salary problems during their live.
Moreover, there is no reason for government to forbid for community to earn money on certain level. When people earn extremely high salary, it is a favor for governments economy. If the head of country disallow making money in a great deal quantity their economy would decrease, as a result of it they should not ban for their humanity. There is no doubt that small number of countries are not allow earning big salary, however many countries want to have a lot of money.
Taking everything into consideration, I would say that there are no disadvantages of earning high salary. There are more advantages earning more money for themselves and government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'allowed'.
Suggestion: allowed
... that small number of countries are not allow earning big salary, however many countr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8373015873 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52878054417 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9386347374 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.583333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19730167026 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985057063369 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182972675111 0.0667982634062 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128665704778 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132469383697 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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