in some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
In the recent decade, the question of whether industrial complexes and enterprises should be moved out of the urban areas has become a topic of discussion. Although businesses would have to face a myriad of difficulties, if they are located in regional areas, it also brings more positive effects overall.
there are a number of reasons why industrial sites and businesses should be left big cities move to the suburbs. First, this would create a range of job opportunities for local people. They are more likely to earn a stable income, which can help them to improve living standards and boost the local economy. KFC, for example, after expanding to regional areas has provided thousands of jobs for local people, which has helped them earn income and live more comfortably. Second, if companies were located in the countrysides, this would mitigate the environmental problems. a huge amount of toxic gas emissions have been produced by factories annually, which is the major cause of environmental pollution, so moving industrial sites to suburban areas would reduce pollution levels in metropolises.
on the other hand, there are another compelling reasons why enterprises should be moved out of major cities. It is clear that limiting the number of businesses in cities has a positive effect on health problems. The governments would have more space to build squares and parks that encourage children in urban areas to take part in outdoor activities instead of spending an enormous time sitting in front of a computer screen, which help reduce a myriad of health problems such as eye strain or back pain, and so on. in addition, having more space in major cities enable to have a positive on the tourism industry. The governments could build tourism spots such as ecotourism destinations, museums. This would attract more tourists to increase tax revenues for governments.
In conclusion, moving businesses out of cities bring more benefits to human life. The governments should also consider the country's situation to make the best decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7926765451 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546546546547 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9296136626 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192268742382 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648072907257 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530967792467 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137361077209 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371510842095 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.