In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
This is the era of modern technology, most of the population around the world news on online platform rather than printed version. Some people argue that traditional ways of news reading will displace by internet because it is free. I completely disagree with this statement and reading news on papers, books and magazines has its own importance.
Firstly, reading news on hard copy in the early morning along with coffee or tea gives people sense of refreshment which could not get via online media. Even though he/she has accessibility of internet and gadgets for updated article which may not be authentic and not satisfied without reading on his favorite one, as a result his performance may drop. For instance, my uncle made a habit of taking hot drink with reading news on printed version in the dawn, if he missed it his mood goes down and could not concentrate on his work.
Secondly, some researcher have proven that excess screen time has negative effect on persons' health. Recently research done by Myo- Clinic says, spending long hours in front of screen may cause obesity, irregular sleep and so on, and still many more result are in pipeline. Because of that, people are more conscious about their health and avoiding or limiting the screen time which force them to read on printed version. Nowadays people believe that prevention is better than cure this leads to prioritize their health than money.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that popularity of printed news paper may reduce in future but it will not disappear because of online media because it has direct or indirect link to prevent serious health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44182292019 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0648962075 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.363636364 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181600207936 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703627264316 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540696648084 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118118280892 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607614397054 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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