Some say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their spare time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people opine that parents should foster their pupils to participate in various team pursuits in their leisure time; however, others assert that infants must identify how to induldge themselves by their own efforts. I concur that offspring must take the responsibility to enrol themselves in activities. This essay shall delineate both the perspectives and give its opinion.
On the first hand, parents are obliged to motivate their children to engage in several tasks so that they could prosper in them. Participation in such pursuits since childhood would aid them to do well after a few years as they would be experienced in such tasks. Moreover, infants would discover crucial skills such as team player and engagement skills, which would be propitious in their professional life. For instance, parents encourage their offspring to take part in debates at school, and they eventually attempt to become public speakers or politicians because of their effective and persuasive communication skills.
On the other hand, pupils must participate for activities by their own in which they are most interested. Therefore, children ought to choose and enrol for pursuits of their preferences, which would proliferate the efficacy of their dedication and discipline for such tasks. Consequently, they could grow in such most liked fields and become professional experts at a global level. To illustrate, offspring attend sports coaching for exorbitant time and succeed in becoming professional athletes, who play at international levels and make their territories proud.
In conclusion, domination of parents could compel pupils to get into tasks which are of no significance to them. Therefore, children must acknowledge and participate in their preferred group pursuits and strive to pursue them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52346570397 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94666230704 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7376309308 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31385710048 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113171770472 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856407307418 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195129176619 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661678510546 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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