Write about the following topic.
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the world of throat cut competion in media, there is a constant pressure on them not only to provide instant breaking news to audience but also keep them entertained. Spicy news about celebrities life sells like a hot cake as people are very much interested to know more about their heroes. However, it costs celebrities freedom of theor private life which in my view is quite unfair and unjustified.
Generrally people are famous becuase of their exceptional skill, qualities which provides them sucess in their professional life. For example - A popular politicians, Fine actors, top sportsmen etc. However, they are still a human being and in personal life their needs are same as any normal next door person. Because of Paparazzi, famous people are unable to enjoy a normal life. As instance, it is extremely difficult for celeberities to go to shopping malls, spend time with family on beaches, play with their children in park or meet their friends in a restaurnat. In the past, when some famous people tried to get engaged in above mentioned activities, media tried to capture their persoanl moments without any consent. Hence, celebreties need to be always consious of their image not only in the profressional life but also in personal life.
Theese days, there is too much expectations from celebreties. People see them as role model and look upto them and expect ideal behavior all the time. In the process, it is completely forgotten that celebrities are also normal human being and subject to mood swings, emotional breakdown and prone to errors. Extreme covergare of perosnal life from media can jeopardise famous people image without any strong reason.
One of the reason, Media go after famous people is that its easy to sell to the viewers and in trun they gain a competitive edge and commercial success. However, media should put more effort to find success stories of more such people who has contributed a lot but their effort has not been recognized yet. This is hard but right way.
Finaly, i would conclude by saying that media has huge influnce on the society, hence they should act responsbily. In present times, if celebrities want to share about theor personal life, they can use social media to do so. Hence, media should focus on more quality content and keep playing a major role in building a healthy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, still, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93181818182 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57460797684 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8516087183 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.65 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260797946307 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738919860454 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443776637607 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135698726112 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427996284045 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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