One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living enlarged and life expectancy is increasing .
There are many positives aspects to improving health care . As well as increasing the number of ambulances we can save many lives as a result . This is very necessary for suburban villages today . Another positive aspect of improving health care is that the number of people will increase and our economy will grow . Demand for many homes , cars will increase . Now it is very important for our country to develop medical care . Many people today have to go to developed countries for medical treatment.
There are also disadvantages to the development of medical care . The number of people will increase and we will start to face various global problems . For example , water shortages may begin after 50 to 60 years . The demand for cars in cities is increasing and the gases and fumes coming out of cars pollute the air . If the number of people grows in this way , viruses like Covid virus will continue to multiply . The development of medical care can lead to many problems . Even air would not be enough for dwellers and creatures too .
In conclusion , I think it is good that medical care has improved . Because people's love for each other should not be lost as a result .
One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living enlarged and life expectancy is increasing .
There are many positives aspects to improving health care . As well as increasing the number of ambulances we can save many lives as a result . This is very necessary for suburban villages today . Another positive aspect of improving health care is that the number of people will increase and our economy will grow . Demand for many homes , cars will increase . Now it is very important for our country to develop medical careb. Many people today have to go to developed countries for medical treatment .
There are also disadvantages to the development of medical care . The number of people will increase and we will start to face various global problems . For example, water shortages may begin after 50 to 60 years . The demand for cars in cities is increasing and the gases and fumes coming out of cars pollute the air . If the number of people grows in this way , viruses like Covid virus will continue to multiply . The development of medical care can lead to many problems . Even air would not be enough for dwellers and creatures too .
In conclusion , I think it is good that medical care has improved . Because people's love for each other should not be lost as a result .
- The chart lower gives information on the percentage of British persons give money to helping hand by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 The least charitable were those ages 18 to 25 years In 2010 10 percent less donations were made than in 1990 In 1990
- The chart lower gives information on the percentage of British persons give money to helping hand by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 The least charitable were those ages 18 to 25 years In 2010 10 percent less donations were made than in 1990 In 1990
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- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living enlarged and life expectancy is increasing There are many positives aspects to improving health care As well as increasing the number of ambulances we can save many lives as a resu 56
- The chart lower gives information on the percentage of British persons give money to helping hand by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 The least charitable were those ages 18 to 25 years In 2010 10 percent less donations were made than in 1990 In 1990
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82882882883 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55865574803 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7231718166 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0588235294 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0588235294 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497322380064 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17779207196 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187724432387 0.0667982634062 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355406796693 0.151304729494 235% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.202529458518 0.056905535591 356% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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