Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her.
In your letter, you should:
-describe the gift
-tell how it will be delivered
-explain why you chose it.
Hello Jobs,
I hope you and your family are safe in this unprecedented times! It was fun last month when we did shopping for your new house. I’m just writing to tell you that I’ve got an amazing surprise for you.
I still remember your love for household items, but the love towards the chandeliers is out of this world! Last week, you’ve got two brand new of them. Unfortunately, you don’t have it for your living room so I thought to gift it. It has an amazing golden lights with efficient LED-technology, which is made in Germany.
I know that you really like exotic masterpieces, however, this one is limited-edition one. After your visit to the IKEA store, I asked them to save it for you. Surprisingly, they called me today, and It will be delivered by UPS service tomorrow afternoon at your new address.
You must be astonished that why I opted this gift for you. Do you remember, you were planning to buy this? But due to some issues with your floor structure, you need to pay some unintended money to your contractor. I hope you will love this piece of glass.
See you soon, and good-bye, till then!
With love,
Apoorva
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Jobs, I hope you and your family are safe in t...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'shop'
Suggestion: shop
...imes! It was fun last month when we did shopping for your new house. I’m just writing to...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'light'?
Suggestion: light
...ht to gift it. It has an amazing golden lights with efficient LED-technology, which is...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65365853659 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62928186792 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653658536585 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3640489646 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3846153846 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385379382233 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151284606515 0.0766984524023 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074922656017 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220792902603 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783474842535 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.