TOPIC: Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
In the modern era, the emergence of high- quality multimedia, a widely stocked market, and deeply knowledgeable for each individual led to substantially the world’s economies. We need thanks to promote of globalization, but unexpecting things which related to trouble. In my opinion, I think there are bringing both positive and negative side.
Currently, the advent of highlighted intelligent technology and gradually optimized the linking of each nation to renew and dramatically influence on the global market. On the other hand, there are several advantages of globalization to bring highly contributed in our the rat race. First of all, the growth of economy countries will rise sharply and highly seeking out opportunities to apply valuable companies for the workforce. Each governments are unwaste of time to guidance citizens willing to discover other investigators as well as bringing profitable for our countries. Next, the ability of broadening knowledge about Culture, Education, Science, Technique,… will be simply for communicators, especially status of unemployed working will be tackled through co-operate and international relationships. Besides, the competition of stocking become more engaging and desirable.
As far as I concerned, we seemly recognized that the development of the world’s economies from attributing of globalization, but it does not mean that the drawback of this trending will be abandoned. In fact, some countries is sticking to fast pace-life and out-of-control cultural diversity. The racism undeservedly competed and multi-religion easily caused a loss of discipline and sociable for internal unions and communities. In addition, industrialization is the consequence of borning globalization. As an example of the Co2 and Gas emissions was exhausted from the factories and mean of transportation which damaged seriously ecosystem, typically contaminated water, and even deforestation has been rising for illegal purposes day by day. Furthermore, the high birth rate is leads to the exploration of the population which occurres in developing countries, prevailing of homeless people and social evil are worrying about issues.
To sum up, I personally assumed that the wave of globalization promotes useful factors to boost economies for each territories, and disturbing problems are hard to escape. Therefore, it can be said that step by step to the global world is proud of ourselves, actually all nations have the responsibility of keeping result is not exceeding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 431, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
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Line 2, column 665, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...t Culture, Education, Science, Technique,… will be simply for communicators, espec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in fact, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69946808511 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42163842263 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640957446809 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.199577084 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.058823529 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129274679285 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362206509366 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429264554746 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793818202834 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240362366929 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 78.4519038076 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.