In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Currently, in the rapid development of social platform, every amenity of life seems to be at hand. As the amelioration of living standards, there is a controversy among some nations as to whether owning a home is much better than renting one or not. This undoubted fact leads to a perspicuous question: is it the best choice ever to take this case into account? From my point of view, I do believe that it is worth considering the situation by dint of a wide range of reasons and this phenomenon should be widely seen as a positive case.
First and foremost, it is an indisputable fact that a vast majority of urban dwellers and rural dwellers in developed or developing countries share the same desire to have their own home on account of many benefits. For instance, inasmuch as they want to save money for other uses such as purchasing clothes, hanging out with friends or roaming around the world...etc apart from being so stressful about renting fee. What is more, it stands to reason that when owning a home, people tend to be relieved and easy to having the time of their life now that the biggest worry about food and shelter has been solved somehow from the very outset. Consequently, combining these figures, it is a no-brainer thing to say that the need of buying one’s own house is worth being thoroughly examined in some countries.
Moreover, as far as I’m concerned, I find it necessary to accentuate my very thought of believing that it is a positive situation. One point in favor of the public opinion on the essence of owing a home is that they have a clear target to fulfill, not an abstract one so they can push forward to achieve the goal despite unwanted hindrances. Additionally, one particularly interesting fact highlighted in a well-known newspaper is that in the futuristic world where people are living in the constant pressure of being outshone, setting a strategy to have a better future without much worry about place of residence is needed.
By way of conclusion, I once reaffirm my belief that the very idea of having a home should be taken into consideration. In light of those benefits, my considered opinion is that down the road, people need to have a more thorough insight into this situation and look on it as a positive thing to achieve
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ere is a controversy among some nations as to whether owning a home is much better than renti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, as to, for instance, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70822942643 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73770260954 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558603491272 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5155667612 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.230769231 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8461538462 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302056802274 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953326577526 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439479307872 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172940382757 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678115115201 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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