You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain what happened when you phoned the shop
say what you would like the manger to do
Dear sir/madam,
I am writing this letter to express my disappointment about your product and service. Couples of week ago, I bought 'Mixer' from your shop which located in Black street, Barcelona.
when i purchased my new 'Mixer' of 'Maharaja' company, I was very excited to use it. but, my happiness was for short lived. Firstly, I tried prepare gravey in between mixer stopped. after sometimes I changed items of cup, because i felt even I was experiment of hard items but, second time , same incident happened again. thus, I realize there was not my item's issue. but your Mixer not functioning well. Secondly, when I inspected with juicer Jar, It is not capable to bland proper fruit. I think may be issue in bland of jar. There after, I called to 'service department' of your shop . but the person who received the call, he blame on me and said that 'I am responsable for that. and behaved like rude and after my argue, he gave promises to replace mixer within two day from my home, but till now not done.
I am very disappointed with your company. I don't have any extra mixer. so, I request you to take some step for those person and replace within three days. otherwise I will file a suite for counterfeit product.
I await your respone as soon as possible.
your faithfully,
Krisha Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: When
... located in Black street, Barcelona. when i purchased my new Mixer of Maharaja co...
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...ted in Black street, Barcelona. when i purchased my new Mixer of Maharaja comp...
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...repare gravey in between mixer stopped. after sometimes I changed items of cup, becau...
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...metimes I changed items of cup, because i felt even I was experiment of hard item...
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...xperiment of hard items but, second time , same incident happened again. thus, I r...
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...nd time , same incident happened again. thus, I realize there was not my items issue...
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...I realize there was not my items issue. but your Mixer not functioning well. Second...
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.... I think may be issue in bland of jar. There after, I called to service department of your...
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...alled to service department of your shop . but the person who received the call, h...
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...nd said that I am responsable for that. and behaved like rude and after my argue, h...
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... very disappointed with your company. I dont have any extra mixer. so, I request you...
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...r company. I dont have any extra mixer. so, I request you to take some step for th...
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Message: Did you mean 'this person' or 'those people', 'those persons'?
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...so, I request you to take some step for those person and replace within three days. otherwis...
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...e person and replace within three days. otherwise I will file a suite for counterfeit pro...
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...e person and replace within three days. otherwise I will file a suite for counterfeit pro...
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...it your respone as soon as possible. your faithfully, Krisha Patel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as for, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47931262715 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670995670996 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3989158876 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.3684210526 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1578947368 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94736842105 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186152146284 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544337429058 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409732985778 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111924390387 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353273061239 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.