Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Agree/disagree?
It is often argued that parents should spend extra time with their children in order to assist them with their homework. I totally agree with this viewpoint because it will help parents to know about their children’s weak subject and they can also keep an eye on their progress.
First of all, parents nowadays are much more concerned about their child’s studies and their difficulty in understanding certain subjects. So, if they teach them by giving them some extra time, it will eventually help them master the subjects their kids need assistance with. It will not only improve their child’s grades but also make them more interested in learning. Therefore, parents must give some more time to their children in order to teach them and to know which subjects they are struggling with.
Additionally, parents’ tutoring can help them understand their child’s academic progress. If parents stay with their children to help them complete their homework, they can keep an eye on their children. It will no longer be a concern for them whether their kids complete homework every day or not. They do not need to worry if their children are indulging in some time wasting activities like social media. They can keep track of their progress. For instance, mostly children who fail in some subjects tend to lie at home that they passed the exams. But if they are studying under the parents’ supervision, the chances of fooling parents will decrease. Hence, it is advisable that parents must take some extra time out of their hectic schedule for tutoring kids and to track their progress.
To conclude, it is certainly important that parents give their precious time to their children to help them academically so that they can enhance their study skills for their bright future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a parent' or simply 'parents'?
Suggestion: a parent; parents
...eve that time is the biggest asset that a parents can give to their children. By spending...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89825581395 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51108783761 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497093023256 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3099063714 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6111111111 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.508864119577 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165920397301 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189588370619 0.0667982634062 284% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328621488708 0.151304729494 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195852786625 0.056905535591 344% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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