You recently attended a conference and you would like to give a presentation about the information you gained by attending the conference.
Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter:
describe what type of presentation you have in mind
what topics it would cover and how long it would take
who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Sean,
As you already know, I have attended four day confrence on "Human Centric Design" in Vietnam. I am willing to share my learning with eveyone in the team.
I am planning to prepare a presentation to summarize all the key takeways from the confrence into power point. However, I feel that it may not be sufficient to fully undersatnd human centric design. Hence, In addition, after power point presentation, I would give a hands on exercise to team. This will help them to understand the concept as well as practice it. Exercise will cover only few important topics of human centric design like "Ladder Thinking" , "Bold statment" and "SWAT Analysis". Since this course is design oriennted so we can ask business analysts and project managers to join it. I understand that everyone has very busy schedule hence i just want to cover this workshop in 4 hour hours and next week Friday aftenoon is best time to conduct it.
I would like to seek your permission for this workshop. Please let me know your feedback on my request and it would be great if you can join the wrokshop as well.
Regards,
Shailabh.
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| 2021-01-31 | shailabhjc | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hand' or simply 'hands'?
Suggestion: a hand; hands
... power point presentation, I would give a hands on exercise to team. This will help the...
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Line 4, column 465, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... design like 'Ladder Thinking' , 'Bold statment' and 'SWA...
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Line 4, column 765, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...our hours and next week Friday aftenoon is best time to conduct it. I would like to se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, well, i feel, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9386160671 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2660423517 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130388929922 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480868805836 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599591960687 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111862945437 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675773010901 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.