In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very importany for people.
Why might this be the case ?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situaition ?
In the modern world, owning a house or property is very profitable for people, and renting is important for people who do not always live in a particular city. In this text, I'm going to explain the positive and negative aspects of this problem.
On the one hand, renting is also convenient and comfortable for people because they will not have problems with utilities and other payment systems. many immigrants in large states live in rent because they live in a rent convenient to them in a financial situation and they will not face various problems. The best side to get a rental house is for immigrants and for tourists who live in a rental on certain days and it is profitable for them. At the same time there are bad sides for example for local residents it is a big problem to live in rent because they will live there for a long time and it will be very expensive for them.
On the other hand, owning a house is very comfortable and profitable for people because if a person owns a house, he spends less money and can freely live in his house and in some cases, he may give his house for rent and earn money. And in any case, the ownership of property is very important and I believe in this regard is not negative.
In conclusion, I want to emphasize that owning property is much better than renting. In this regard, many people do the right thing by owning property.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in any case, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41176470588 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40144132038 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486274509804 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5402866362 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285087939972 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127018058507 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055107204136 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197693037137 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587032871321 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.