The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The bar chart compare the percentage of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
Bought fresh coffee near 45% at a similar percentage in Melbourne as in Sydney in last four weeks. But Bought instant coffee more 45% in Sydney city in last 4 weeks.In according to Bought instant coffee close 50% in Melbourne city in last four weeks. After went to a cafe for coffee or tea more 60% in Sydney in last 4 weeks. But two city went to a cafe for coffee or tea a similar percentage near 65% in Melbourne and Hobart in last four weeks.
Also two city bought fresh coffee close 35% in Brisbane and Adelaide in last 4 weeks. Approximately went to a cafe for coffee or tea more 55% in Brisbane city in last 4 weeks. Bought instant coffee 50% in Adelaide in last 4 weeks. Went to a cafe for coffee or tea a similar percentage near 50% in this city in last 4 weeks. Bought fresh coffee close 40% in Hobart city in last 4 weeks.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rinking habits in five Australian cities Bought fresh coffee near 45% at a simil...
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...ities Bought fresh coffee near 45% at a similar percentage in Melbourne as ...
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...rne as in Sydney in last four weeks. But Bought instant coffee more 45% in Sydney...
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...more 45% in Sydney city in last 4 weeks.In according to Bought instant coffee clos...
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...elbourne and Hobart in last four weeks. Also two city bought fresh coffee close ...
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... and Hobart in last four weeks. Also two city bought fresh coffee close 35% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25543478261 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29478506969 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 59.0 106.607317073 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.320652173913 0.547539520022 59% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6002579688 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239788936492 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134778891982 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110165219725 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305173778506 0.15604864568 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.257730064328 0.0819641961636 314% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 8.06136585366 77% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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