Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:
• Give details about the course
• Describe what equipment you will need for the course
• Ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre
Dear Sir,
Being an employee of A & K Law Firm, I am penning down this letter to inquire about the amenities for a training session that we tend to organize in your centre.
Apparently, I have heard quite applauding comments about your centre which attracted me to host this special session of our staff in this centre. The event constitutes a training session on Staff personality development by some renowned personalities of our realm considering the need of good marketing rapport.
As this is a course for our whole staff, we would be requiring seating arrangement of 200 people. Additionally, a projector along with speakers and wireless microphone are needed for conducting this seminar. A white broad should also be kept on the platform or stage.
Apart from these apparatus, I would like to ask some questions related to cooling system as the scorching heat is making the people uncomfortable thus an effective air conditioning system is a mandate. Would you be assisting us in arranging the morning tea followed by a lunch? Or I should consider doing it on my behalf. I would like to get the revert accompanied with the quotation of this event at the earliest.
Looking forward towards your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
Liza Hedan
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Being an employee of A & K Law Firm, I a...
^^^
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ng it on my behalf. I would like to get the revert accompanied with the quotation of this ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Liza Hedan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, look, so, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00956937799 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89768458665 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674641148325 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.363169211 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195092655468 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643487408856 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562627155763 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995090709178 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417437525524 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Being an employee of A & K Law Firm, I a...
^^^
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ng it on my behalf. I would like to get the revert accompanied with the quotation of this ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Liza Hedan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, look, so, thus, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00956937799 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89768458665 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674641148325 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.363169211 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195092655468 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643487408856 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562627155763 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995090709178 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417437525524 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.