Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Communication and practical experience could be the potential issue when one is living in the country that speaks completely different language. In my experience, I found out that everyone living in abroad experienced such issues in some point of their lives because of the language barrier and culture differences. Hence, I am a hundred percent agree with the statement that problematic situations occur when living abroad with different spoken language.
First of all, almost every countries in this world use different languages to communicate yet without learning their communicating tools (language), even simple actions could turn into serious problem. Brutal situation could occur due to inability of expression in life threathening emergency situation. Hence, it is essential to make sure that there are less language barrier when one is planning to live foreign country, not only for daily communication but also for survival.
Secondly, not only language knowledge cannot remove the daily struggles, but also the culture difference can affect even more when living totally different places that one has never been before. For instance, when I first visited in the USA, I recognized that there are huge gaps between our culture including simple communication tools. I was struggled to understand their meaning because in Mongolia, where I come from, people usually express their feelings with less facial and body languages but only verbally, whilst in the USA, the expression usually shows by facialy with unspecific verbal meaning. Therefore, I observed that learning about the culture has a same importance with learning languages.
In conclusion, it is true that maintaining life in foreign country has some disadvantage including a language barrier and culture shock, yet prevention from possible issue by learning and educating is essential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...es but only verbally, whilst in the USA, the expression usually shows by facialy ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85020720872 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3658174336 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.181818182 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172451226225 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634083002543 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406161053344 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103146828211 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347941406332 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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