In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation.
Nowadays, majoriyiy of countries people be renting but most of them prefer buying the home rather than renting. This view very right and positive situation.
First of all, if people go in the foregian countries they are living there therafore they are need renting or hotel but this situation there are very right way. What it is? If you to be going to foregian countries you take mostly money. Becouse you go there bought flat or owning home this you can in your own home and you live there everyday themselves. There are this kinds of profits if you bought home. Whather you renting in flat can not most of works want and dont use all of them tools, for example: TV, WI-FI, WASHING MACHINE and others. Moreover you must pay everyday life there.
In the other hand, if you live own home home there are several defect for instance : you have to name the house and everymonth comes to you a lots of taxs this is land taxes, home taxes and electronics taxs and others then to you have to pay all of them. This situation you dont like have in own home in foregian countries. Therafore you going to travel in other city you relating in flat or hotel.
In conclusion, this situation very right way this rentind in flatand positive sitation, but you purchsing home you may be damage most of. In my opinion this negativ situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22412832019 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508333333333 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.0307691918 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382474265117 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143481814129 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764584939376 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260177918327 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346658966035 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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