In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In this materialistic world, in several nations, particularly in cities, many people prefer to lead an independent life. While this tendency has some positive aspects that enhance personal skills and improve the financial status, I believe this might lead to some other problems later in their life.
On the one hand, people choose solo life for several reasons. One among them is the independency. It is seen that people living alone are responsible to look after many things such as cooking, cleaning, purchasing commodities, and balancing job-related work. A recent survey conducted by a popular magazine, The Week, is a testimony for this, where 69% of youngsters who lead individual life are familiar with the above basic skills rather than who stay in a joint family. Another main advantage is the economical perspective. Those who live alone can probably save money due to lesser expenditure when compared to the conventional way of living. Thus, they can utilise it for personal needs like hangouts, dine out which may not be possible in a joint family.
However, this trend has some drawbacks as well. The major disadvantage is that leading a solo life may cause various psychological issues. In many developed countries, the number of people suffering from depression is escalating day by day. Isolation could be the major reason for this. Unlike the bygone days, there is no one for sharing and caring. This, in turn, leads to a stressful mind resulting in depression. Yet another problem related to this is the increased use of drugs and involvement in social habits among adults. Many studies indicate that no matter how educated a person is, isolation and solitude can make an individual addicted to drugs and alcohol.
To recapitulate, people can reap some benefits from individual life regarding personal development and economic status. Nevertheless, I firmly hold the view that this can cause some negative impact on their lives in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to solo'
Suggestion: to solo
...life. On the one hand, people choose solo life for several reasons. One among the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14641744548 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77572016454 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619937694704 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9496695211 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9473684211 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227596095036 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627263729469 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498032104027 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144292261418 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243342705803 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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