Parents tend to give cell phones to their children from a very young age although
they are often confused about the right age to allow the use of cell phones. What
are the reasons for this? At what age and for what reasons do you think a child
should be given a cell phone?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from you’re your
knowledge or experience.
It is indeed true that mobile phones are reaching the pockets of everybody in this world and children
are also not exempted from this phenomenon. Nowadays, it is fast growing trend to provide cell
phones to children in early age of life and parents are unaware about what is right age to operate cell
phones for children? This essay will discuss about what are the reasons for parents to give mobile
phones to their children in young age and give suggestions for what is right age for children to use
mobiles.
Putting light on the cause, it can be said that, in today era, parents are busy in their works and not
able to give sufficient time to their children. So, parents give cellphone to their children for
communication from workplace. In one research it can be seen that 40% parents interact from call
with their children from job place. Moreover it is ongoing tread in kids to have own mobile phone
for playing games and use social media platforms. Hence, children raise demand for own cell phones
to their parents and guardians fulfill their wishes for social status and tend to be good parents.
However, parents are always confused about what is right age for children to use of mobile phone?
Because using of cell phones in young age would be distract children from their studies and impact
on children behavior. While today, parents are helpless to give cell phone to their children. For
example, corona pandemic impact on children schooling and education institute started online
education. In addition children use mobile phones for online classes, attend online tests and search
study related information on internet.
In conclusion, it can be said that parents have much workload in their jobs and not interact with their
children properly. Although cell phone has negative impact on children and their life, parents allow
to their children to use mobile phones for good propose.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04049844237 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32124649391 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451713395639 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0197161484 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526043990299 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220133290475 0.084324248473 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145982786438 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194738289374 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144761690092 0.056905535591 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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