Write a letter to your friend who asked you to give some suggestion to his son is coming to your country. Tell him which city he should go to, how he can get a job, how he can make friends.
I hope this mail finds you in radiant health. It made me delightful that your son Rishab is coming to my country on work visa. It is an Honour for me that you have asked for my suggestion and I would be pleased to help him.
Canada is one of the famous country in the world. All cities are well developed but Toronto would be the best option for your Rishab. It is full of national and multinational companies, restaurants and hotel industry so finding a job would be easy here rather than other cities. Most importantly, the weather is always joyful and constant here in between summer and winter. Other cities like Winnipeg and Alberta are also good but in winter season or especially in snow their work or employment rate goes down because of low temperature.
As I am living in Toronto with my family. We live in apartment so he can stay with us. Our building is located in main downtown so it would be easy for him to find more work places. There are so many places where people usually hangouts with their friends like gardens, clubs and so on which will enable him to make new friends. Even my neighborhood is very friendly which will avoid his homesickness. Let me know about the exact date and time of his flight as soon as possible so I can make arrangements.
Hoping to see Rishab soon!
Yours lovingly,
Manmohan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 538, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e goes down because of low temperature. As I am living in Toronto with my family. ...
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Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Rishab soon! Yours lovingly, Manmohan
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51239669421 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47299463795 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648760330579 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9119447609 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194766798976 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581988985909 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441070860502 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085718715997 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621242492884 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.