In many countries , online shopping is becoming more and more popular . Some people think that this is having a negative impact on society . To what extent do you agree or disagree .
It cannot be denied that online shopping is advancing by leaps and bounds , therefore this trend has obtained a lot of popularity among individuals , however a handful people ponder that doing online shopping has detrimental effects on society . I am in consummate accord with this notion . My stance will be elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs .
Commencing with the airlines that justify why online shopping take a heavy toll . Initially, when customers will purchase any product online, then they will have to share their personal details such as credit card number and bank account for doing payment which put detrimental repercussions on them because sometimes, the issue of misusing and hacking can be seen and it gives birth to cyber crime . For instance, a number of cases can be read in newspapers regarding those consumers who have suffered from tremendous amount of loss as they have sent their bank with online shopkeepers . Hence, doing online shopping is risky if compared with offline shopping .
In addition to this, by doing online shopping people will incognizant about the quality of products as they have to order thing while watching picture only instead of touching, due to this sometime they have to receive imperfect condition of stuff . To clarify, when women buy online suites , than they have to keep deprive themselves from checking fabric of that suite which they want to order, in this way they have to face difficulty because bad quality of suite can be delivered to them . In this case, online shopping proves bone for everyone.
In compendium , I would like to ingeminate that although purchasing goods has become trend nowadays, it has various negative impacts which cannot be neglected like, cyber crime and absence of physical connection.
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- Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school Other feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time discuss both views and give your opinion 81
- Giving detailed description of crimes in newspapers and on television has bad consequences Some people therefore suggest that the government should impose restrictions on them To what extent do you agree or disagree 69
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- Today there are a lot of websites providing news on the internet Some people believe that these websites will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19163763066 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65209351268 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2255261285 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.454545455 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215773174632 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893730334758 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599720971385 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128296459556 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434287443184 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.