You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Thomas,
I am writing this letter to enquire about some electric goods required for my new house.
Since I am building a new house , I need to buy all kind of electrical goods. To begin with, I need 100 meter of strong high quality electrical wires. Secondly, I need switches and power points as well. Power point should have USB ports as well to charge all the electronic devices. Finally, I would require 15 LED bulbs and 10 fans of 3 blades along with it's regulator.
It will be great, If you can send me itemised price for all of the above listed items. If any of them is not available, will you do me a favour to order for me. Furthermore, I am planning to visit to your store next month. Would you be able to hold goods for me for a month or do I need to plan my visit earlier.
Looking forward for your reply on my queries.
Regards,
Sheila has
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... house. Since I am building a new house , I need to buy all kind of electrical go...
^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...trical goods. To begin with, I need 100 meter of strong high quality electrical wires...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
..., If you can send me itemised price for all of the above listed items. If any of them is n...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26666666667 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30646594702 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684848484848 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6788427325 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.6666666667 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178310489875 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056687051045 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586329794971 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943642041076 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700361022769 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... house. Since I am building a new house , I need to buy all kind of electrical go...
^^
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...trical goods. To begin with, I need 100 meter of strong high quality electrical wires...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
..., If you can send me itemised price for all of the above listed items. If any of them is n...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26666666667 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30646594702 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684848484848 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6788427325 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.6666666667 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178310489875 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056687051045 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586329794971 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943642041076 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700361022769 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.