Many people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Everyone has always desired a fulfilling life with financial sufficiency. But this essay approves of the second opinion because when it comes to genuine personal happiness, there are many other factors besides just economic achievements.
Whereas the shortage in the amount of earnings puts people under pressure on how they can afford it, financial adequacy offers people the capability of meeting almost all their needs without consideration. Furthermore, that money is considered to be an honourable reward to ones having high achievements in studying or working such as scholarships and bonus salary has been one of the most positive methods for motivation. Not to believe that the number of people whose economic success donates to charitable organisations is also much higher than the other, which satisfies their desire to share the property with others.
However, not every well-off person could find true blissful meanings of their life whereas the median-income stills stay satisfied and enjoyable with theirs. The most common reason is that the privileged are usually alone while being too absorbed in making money or chasing far-reaching goals to take notice of their little happiness. Almost all people agree that money has brought them everything, including happiness even though economic success only offers them satisfaction.
For the time being, money has been known as one of the best means people make use of to satisfy their life standard and career. However, finance doesn't make everything sense, genuine personal happiness includes, but not merely just financial achievements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...onsidered to be an honourable reward to ones having high achievements in studying or...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e standard and career. However, finance doesnt make everything sense, genuine personal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, well, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48582995951 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74222095587 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672064777328 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.197572744 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167977134668 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629209039323 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656262327674 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102713085056 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349452157283 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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