The diagram shows the process fo making bricks for use in the building industry.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram describes the process of generating bricks utilised in construction, beginning with digging the clay and cease with product delivery.
At the first step, the workers use a machine called digger to collect the ingredient by digging clay underneath the topsoil. Next, many heaps of clay are strained through a metal grid to keep the small ones and then those are passed by a roller. After being added water and sand, the mixture will be put into the shaping step. There are two common methods to create brick shapes: one is using a wire cutter and the other is using mould.
Following that, the bricks are transported into a drying oven, kept in from 24 to 48 hours to make them completely dry. At this point, the bricks will go through two kilns. The first one works at the moderate temperature between 200 and 980 degree Celsius, and the second one activates in a much higher temperature range from 870 to 1300 degree. Then, hot bricks are put into the cooling chamber and stored for about 2 to 3 days. Finally, the complete products are packaged and ready for distribution to building sites.
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for yo 78
- The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Advantages and disadvantages of computers in education 61
- Some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Many people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success Others argue that happiness depends on other factors Discuss both sides and give your opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73846153846 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39649096969 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6703133339 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12926267647 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479747469177 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369597668123 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811795922469 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203475287038 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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