The most important factor for a manager is someone who is warm and friendly to his staff. Do you agree or disagree?
The most important factor for a manager is someone who is warm and friendly to his staff. It is factor important for the employer. I agree the factor.
My opinion the first people should get along with each other. This could be an employer, employee, manager. The factor most important an employer and employee. The most companies manage warm and friendly. Being a manager in companies requires this. When the working at the work some manager be warm and friendly working with for worker and an employee. The factor is very important for the correct management of the business.
At the world have more business and good managers. Company executives select senior managers to manage their operations at a high level. I think these companies stand out and make money thanks to these managers. They are working just a lot with this client and worker. A very good company has a good manager and a good employee. They are working warm and friendly. Some companies do not have a gentle and friendly manager. This is a huge problem in companies and in the collapse of companies.
We can see these in any company and any business. The most important factor for a manager is someone who is warm and friendly to his staf and we can see that factor is very important any companies and any business work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71929824561 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46494349734 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44298245614 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9810829378 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.8 106.682146367 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.9 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395623898509 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143705692704 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185175799063 0.0667982634062 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.328881567133 0.151304729494 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.234713754246 0.056905535591 412% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.91 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.98 8.58950901804 70% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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