Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only.
First and foremost, when people have lots of the skills they make themselves more ready to accept different commitments, and as a result they have a better chance to achive success. If the companies will to survive this economic condition, they need persons who can face and deal with various tasks. During and after economic crisis the firms forced to suppress lots of their employees, but the individuals who were skilled in more than one task. The other day, i read an article was mentioning that of every ten persons, 9 lost their job in tension and the ones who get thrived to continue their job are doing multiple tasks at once.
Furthermore, when people are proficient in more than one skill, they have a rough idea of how to solve the probable-facing obstacles. Although people with diverse skill have shallow knowledge about the facts, they have a rough idea when they encounter hurdles in their career and this aves their way to push back the obstacles and achieve victorious. My personal experience is a beneficial exmaple of this. I remeber during semaphore, we had a proect to accomplish about Satellite Attitude Determination, in which we were going to find attitude (Euler) angles of a proposed satellite. This was a challenging task becase we were suppsed to earn our maser's in Electronics engineering and lots of us did not have any idea of how to cope with this. But, because of high interest of satellite materials i had, i have read some articles about it and i could suggest a crude approach. As a result i could pass the project while lots of my companions failed. Had i have not read about that supplement subject, i would fail.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In universities people tend to be concerned more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn Some people propose that students should learn subjects with fast job growth including science tech 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In universities people tend to be concerned more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn Some people propose that students should learn subjects with fast job growth including science tech 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...d in more than one task. The other day, i read an article was mentioning that of ...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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...y encounter hurdles in their career and this aves their way to push back the obstacl...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...of high interest of satellite materials i had, i have read some articles about it...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... i have read some articles about it and i could suggest a crude approach. As a re...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t and i could suggest a crude approach. As a result i could pass the project while...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...d suggest a crude approach. As a result i could pass the project while lots of my...
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Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ile lots of my companions failed. Had i have not read about that supplement subject,...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...not read about that supplement subject, i would fail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73263888889 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67662843808 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4982463213 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.583333333 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189861363363 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668059274332 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732938062987 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168002506413 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751543057603 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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