The world’s natural resources, such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of the situation? What can be done to solve the problem?
it has been universally acknowledged that the problem of the dramatic increase in the utilization of global's natural resource is escalating at an alarming rate in the current scenario. this mainly can cause loss of biodiversity together with the economic crisis. there are a plethora of solutions that can be used to overcome the obstacle of overusing up raw material.
Commencing on the causes that occur from this situation. The first reason is the death of living beings on earth, is due to the lack of resources and this is the key factor influencing this issue. In other words, the human will suffocate to death as they do not get fresh air to breath as well as clean water to drink. Therefore, this can lead to lots of diseases. The second contributing factor is the fall of the economy. For instance, besides Saudi Arabia is one of the largest oil suppliers in the world, 70% of the income comes from selling crude oil. if in case this resource gets dry, then the complete economy of the world drops.
there are two effective solutions to this issue. one way to curb this issue is by birth control. Furthermore, if introducing the law on how a plethora of children should the parents can have could be used to help reduce the usage of oil, forest, and freshwater. By do this, the resource will never get dry and will have an ample amount of time to regenerate the resources. Another method of dealing with a natural wealth that is overused is to have more supervision by the UNO, which should monitor the human activities such as the extra supply of oil to other nation, cutting down the trees, and misusing of water.
In conclusion, human activity of using excessive natural substances has an adverse impact on the world's ecosystem; However, we can significantly lessen use of the resource by introducing new government laws along with closely monitoring it. Unless people take the environment more seriously, and governments start investing in this adversity, it is likely that we won’t see any reduction in this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82621082621 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70220673721 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2500816414 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6470588235 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207617223188 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571341979921 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512435364475 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128995962971 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481024932988 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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