The world's natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of the situation? What can be done to solve the problems?
The rational use of natural resources is the basic factor that can drive us toward sustainable development. Nowadays, the unprecedented exploitation of natural resources such as oil, forests, and clean water has caused many serious consequences for the environment.
First, the overexploitation and overuse of oil have caused oil reserves to become increasingly depleted. Petroleum is used mainly as fuel, which also causes a sharp increase in greenhouse gas emissions such as CO2, CH4, etc., which leads to global warming and heavy air pollution in some big cities. Deforestation is also one of the heated problems. Lossing of habitat, imbalanced ecosystem, and the loss of the shield that protects people from natural disasters such as floods, hurricanes, etc ... are visible consequences of this. The irrational use of clean water resources has also caused many parts of the world to fall into serious water shortages. Human health declines and waterborne diseases increase in these regions.
Countries around the world have been working out solutions to reduce the harmful effects of this resource overuse. For the oil problem, finding and developing clean energy so that vehicles are less reliant on this kind of fuel is the best way. Electric and solar vehicles have been developed but still have some disadvantages compared to fossil fuel vehicles. It is necessary to expand these applications to limit the amount of CO2 released into the environment. For the issue of deforestation, planting more trees for forest rehabilitation combined with some forest protection measures are effective ways to address this problem. The exploitation of water resources also requires more relevant and innovative policies such as government instead of charging for the amount of water used by the people, which can be converted to charging for the amount of wastewater that they discharged into the environment. Besides, companies whose activities pollute water sources also need to be dealt with severely.
In conclusion, oil, forests, and clean water are extremely important resources and their proper use is the key to the sustainable development of our society.
- Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings People think that they are free to choose the design they like Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- International airlines have brought enormous benefits to many places At the same time there is concern about its impacts on local inhabitants and livelihood Do the disadvantages of the international airlines outweigh the advantages 84
- Some people think the government should spend money on faster means of public transport However others think money should be spent on other priorities eg cost environment Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology Has this been a positive or negative development 84
- The environmental problems that today s world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation So governments and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the envi 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, so, still, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41839762611 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95705286036 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569732937685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.170575378 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.411764706 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199817255473 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587486311473 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423829805566 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123227934769 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296690513714 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.