There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is an abstract as well as complicated art, which has profound influences on humans. As society develops, the music varies from the traditional one to the international counterpart. For this reason, many people hold the view that traditional music bears more importance compared to music from other countries. From my point of view, each type has its significance and therefore is equally influential.
The first point to bear in mind is that music has long been an inevitable aspect of human lives. Long before humans invented languages, they had used music as a means of communication. It seems that music has such a magical power that it enables people to express a variety of different attitudes owing to its wide range of melodies and tunes. Therefore, even in modern society, two foreigners can still understand each other even if one does not know a word of the language which the other speaks. Besides, it is the emotional effects that explain why music is so crucial to humans. By listening to music, it reminds us of either sweet or sad memories, as well as evoking mixed feelings inside us. Also, music seems to be conducive to a relaxed atmosphere, thus strengthening our ability to concentrate. For instance, there exists a genre of music called ‘lofi’ which most people enjoy listening to while working or studying. Conclusively, music plays a fundamental role in humans lives.
Another point to mention is that the two main kinds of music, namely, traditional and international one, have their own distinct qualities. Firstly, traditional music tends to be less catchy yet with meaningful lyrics and cultural values. Thus, traditional music is generally used in rituals and ceremonies rather than for recreation. Meanwhile, international music includes a wide range of genres to enjoy, such as rock, jazz, folk, and so forth. Due to its vast variations, most people tend to listen to international music for relaxation. However, one must memorize the traditional songs of their country, such as the national anthem, as a way to preserve their cultural values. Conclusively, it would be wrong to claim that traditional music is more important than an international counterpart and vice versa.
In conclusion, music, in general, has powerful effects on humans and each type of it serves different purposes. Hence, I would argue that traditional music and music from other countries are equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15696202532 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92981950518 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549367088608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8701722651 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.5909090909 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9545454545 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.454708212409 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150139090135 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774630672019 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316338225805 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317808565592 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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