Some people believe that educational qualifications always bring success, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often claimed that education is essential for achieving success in life whilst others argue that uneducated people can also become successful in their lives. Although having relevant technical skills help people to earn high income, I believe that university qualifications are crucial for better growth and development of the career.
On the one hand, many would suggest that real work experience is sufficient for may laborious jobs. This is because, many occupation such as a car mechanic or a welder only require physical hard word rather than specific academic qualifications. As a result, many individuals prefer to work at an early age in order to earn an absolute fortune in comparison to those who spent years to obtain educational certification. For example, In year 2019, there was a huge shortage of plumbers in the United Kingdom and their government had invited more than fifty lakh skilled worker with minimal education from different countries in order to meet the demand, and even offered high salaries to these immigrants. However, I disagree with this predicament because education is essential for making work responsibilities more reliable and efficient.
On the other hand, learning concepts and theories is mandatory for gaining executive level jobs. Many organisations offer employment opportunities to only those aspirants who tend to have advanced knowledge of particular subject along with essential professional qualifications. Eventually, these documentations not only help employees to reserve well paid jobs but also assist them to get promoted to even higher positions. For instance, majority of college students around the globe are more inclined towards Science, Technology, Engineering and Maths (STEM) because the requirement for these occupations always remain in high demand in knowledge based economies like U.S.A. Therefore, In my opinion pursuing degree courses is beneficial for young generation because it help them to climb the corporate ladder.
In conclusion, I believe that despite several work skills help adults to pay for their living cost, the positive impact of education can not be undermined. Learning knowledge welcomes a myriad of well paid recruitments for the prospects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occupation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occupations'.
Suggestion: many occupations
...or may laborious jobs. This is because, many occupation such as a car mechanic or a welder only...
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Line 5, column 622, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t for these occupations always remain in high demand in knowledge based economies...
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Line 5, column 676, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in knowledge based economies like U.S.A. Therefore, In my opinion pursuing degree...
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Line 5, column 773, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...eficial for young generation because it help them to climb the corporate ladder. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54227405248 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00812760605 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64139941691 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1798193164 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.230769231 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106529418145 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381543704861 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445768466314 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753521278797 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577751203525 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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