Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that television is beneficial to acquire knowledge while others believe that it can only be used for entertaining people. While television provide a myriad of information about science and wildlife, I believe that it is a great source of enjoyment in the life of people.
On the one hand, television plays a vital role in imparting knowledge about science and history. That is to say, there are many educational channels that broadcast information related to the evolution of mankind and historical concepts. As a result, children get a chance to broaden their horizon of knowledge by understanding different concepts through visual media platform. For example, channels such as Discovery and National Geographic are quite popular among teenagers because it helps them to inculcate plethora of scientific information, which is advantageous for their holistic development. However, In my opinion, this approach is not advisable because advertisement telecasted on television shows often distract learners from understanding knowledge.
On the other hand, many people consider television as a significant tool for entertainment because it helps them to release stress of their routine life. In other words, as there are a myriad of music and drama shows available, which are being streamed on high definition documentaries, these programs tend to entice majority of population to watch television in their leisure time. For example, In India around two third of total population prefer to watch television series in their spare time because they find it as an economical way to burn stress of life. Therefore, I believe that this school of thought is highly adopted because television media brings a wide range of enjoyable movies and music programs.
In conclusion, although television has a positive impact on individuals by acquisition of informative knowledge, I assert that it provides men and women an opportunity to shed burnout and pressure of professional work and domestic responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, third, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48242811502 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13438884483 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.4410538931 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216437320188 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757734239929 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745749504488 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11906554481 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697374287839 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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