Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary
In the past few years, salary and job satisfaction has been one of the most debated topics about people’ working life. Apparently, it is undoubtedly reasonable to put a high priority salary over job contentment. However, in my perspective, finding pleasure from working should be placed more emphasis than money orientation.
To commence with, both individuals, employers and the society can reap a lot of benefits from increasing workers’ job satisfaction. Initially, it is an indispensable force boosting working productivity and creating more values for firms, which is not only highly efficacious but also does not require a lot of resources. Secondly, in terms of individuals’ side, job satisfaction and people’ health and happiness are closely interrelated to each other. A job in which people can find fulfillment and enjoyment is definitely the one offering them a balanced lifestyle, giving them enough time and space for themselves and their family. And vice versa, the sense of being successful in the workplace is the determinant of people’ mental health and daily happiness. On a broader scale, putting the focus on employees’ satisfaction is the most effective approach leading to sustainable development, creating a happier society.
In view of a high salary, there is no denying that payment plays an integral part in defining people’s satisfaction, however, people have to sacrifice more than what they gain from this. A lot of pressure from having to accomplish more, creating more profits for the company is the primary reason for many negative scenarios. Firstly, it is compulsory that workers always work over time, invest a lot of time, energy and intelligence in the job in order to get that high salary. This can jeopardize people’s health when there is a sharp decrease in physical movement and a rise in fast food meals. Secondly, people will find it difficult to spend time for their intimate relationship such as close friends or families, which is the most critical part of their life. Lacking these important bonds will make people feel less supported, happy and motivated in life.
To conclude, in my point of view, despite today’s competitive and expensive world, job satisfaction is the ultimate goal when working.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28453038674 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00925107209 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593922651934 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.208236745 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.5625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127878125585 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443945414936 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310570825635 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896541928943 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356924492034 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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