Some people with a good education and experience decide to move abroad to work. Why is that? What problems does it cause?
For the past few years, there has been a high proportion of highly skilled professionals opting for working abroad in preference to serving in their motherland. My following essay will clarify the reasons behind this scenario as well as some problems it may bring.
To commence with, the majority of workers equipped with excellent academic qualifications and relevant experience make a decision to immigrate with the objective of seeking more opportunities in all aspects of their life. Initially, in terms of their career, it comes down to the lack of sufficient chances for career growth and not getting a decent remuneration for their technical skills. This often happens in developing or underdeveloped countries where many essential industries and professions have not had the prospects of developing yet. In addition to that, most highly trained workers migrate to another land of opportunities with the objective of having a higher living standard. Working abroad in a developed countries means getting exposure to high end services, better healthcare and modern education system for their kids.
This phenomenon is the cause of many adverse problems in their own country. There is no denying that it deprives the local individuals with proper services in the area of science and technology. Many people suffer from low quality of hospitals and schools or exorbitant fees for public services due to the lack of staff while a large number of skilled professionals are devoting their life to another country. Furthermore, brain drain definitely exerted a profound impact on the national economy and the development of the nation. Lacking a highly qualified workforce in almost every field makes it much more challenging for a nation to stimulate factories, companies to flourish and evolve prosperously.
To recapitulate, deciding to move aboard to live and work is in the service of their career prospects and better quality of life. However, this can lead to many unsolved problems and hardships for the local population in their home land owing to the inadequacy of the skilled labor.
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion:
...the inadequacy of the skilled labor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33832335329 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92231673503 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583832335329 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1006320586 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.357142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147513730396 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497145272415 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426431905154 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08855018982 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174301784928 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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