In schools and universities girl trying to chill add subject wild boys to sand subject. what is the reason? Should the trend be changed?
In this present era, all students went to schools and universities, but there is one difference between the boys and girls field. Boys select science subjects, while girls choose arts subjects. This essay will give the reasons behind this situation and also explain possible solutions, which describe in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with plenty of things which creates this phenomenon. First and foremost, the mindset of culture, they think girls become housewives in the future, therefore girls have not required to learn hard subjects like science. Furthermore, boys have the responsibility for earning in the future, and sciences provide a high salary as compared to another field. For example, in India, all high paid jobs belong to science streams such as doctors, engineers, and many more. These are the main reason for those inequalities in selecting subjects.
On the other hand, there are a plethora of steps, which change these scenarios. Firstly, if the government gives equal right to both genders, then girls will motivate to learn other difficult subjects and be a nurse, a doctor in future. Secondly, if the authority provides salary by employees’ knowledge, then students choose subjects by their interest, and girls take science and boys take arts by their curiosity. For instance, the USA government provide money by people knowledge, therefore people of the USA choose both the subject by their interest.
To conclude, this situation is happened because of societies mindset and high salaries, which will solve by providing equality to both genders and paid by employees knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...icult subjects and be a nurse, a doctor in future. Secondly, if the authority provides sa...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...ng equality to both genders and paid by employees knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3568627451 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6807414033 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572549019608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.417349371 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162306394264 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555860854293 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429323698251 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867296795171 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548844961027 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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