It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some would argue that many individuals are born with inherited talent while others argue that anyone can learn a skill to become a successful athlete or music artist. While naturally talented people can achieve success at an early age, I believe that practice and determination play key role to acquire creative knowledge.
On the one hand, many claim that children who are born with acquired skills of music and art tend to achieve goals at a young age. This is because, these individuals already have enough capability to experience arts and only require to polish their existing skills. For example, the popular pop musician Hanna Montana has been to music since she was nine and her success story revealed that it took her minimal efforts to gain popularity. However, it is not necessary that inheritance features of people bring prosperity in life until and unless they began to master these abilities.
On the other hand, a section of society asserts that any person can be trained because practice make a man perfect. In other words, it is evident that if a person performs his activities with utter dedication and hard work, he would certainly be able to climb the competitive ladder. For example, the famous film star of Bollywood in India, Arjun Kapoor was not an actor since he completed his graduation in law, but when he decided to shoot films, he learned acting skills with tremendous efforts and turned out to be an amazing famous star. Therefore, I believe that constant efforts and adequate guidance to acquire skills is beneficial for holistic development of children.
In conclusion, although birth talent allows people to be in the limelight while facing less challenges, I maintain that an appropriate training and guidance tends to be more effective for achieving an artistic talent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...creative knowledge. On the one hand, many claim that children who are born with acquire...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to act'.
Suggestion: to act
...n he decided to shoot films, he learned acting skills with tremendous efforts and turn...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun challenges is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ple to be in the limelight while facing less challenges, I maintain that an appropri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61213195175 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9396238555 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.909090909 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250146556974 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873591253832 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390203492911 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140735984546 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209503752524 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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