The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day

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The maps provide a comparison of the town of Seatown and the changes it has witnessed from 1995 to the present day.

The maps provide information about a comparison of the town of Seatwon and its changes between 1994 and the present movement.

Overall, it is seen clearly from both maps. The fish market and fishing port were removed at the present time. The forest park was replaced by tennis courts.

To comments with, the farmland and forest park from the east, which were transformed into a golf course and tennis courts respectively in the present day. By contrast, a new road was added, which connects houses to the main road, while several new houses had been added in the west. Meanwhile, a cafe from the south side remained the same throughout the period.

Furthermore, several shops had been transformed into a new restaurant, Which was located in the south-west side. A new area for car parking was added by the hotel on the east side. The fish market and fishing port were demolished, whereas new apartments had been constructed in place of the market.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... been transformed into a new restaurant, Which was located in the south-west side...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87116564417 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52146492916 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58282208589 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3488651817 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151473945531 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627585253892 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996312422696 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124339755559 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127915434984 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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