Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
All humans have different personalities which may be good in various tasks. In our system, there are many issues when concerned with males and females. The prompt recommends that both men and women are not suitable for many tasks due to their physical personalities. I partially disagree with this statement due to the following reasons.
To begin, all humans may not have the same physical strength. Some may be strong and the others may be weak. It doesn't mean that only men are strong compared to women. Even many females have more physical strength where they participate in different weight lifting competitions and won prizes too. When compared with this, it says that women also have particular strength and can perform such tasks.
Further, doing smart work provides us more efficiency than hard work. Due to the differences between males and females, it may not result in less efficiency of work by females. Though males have strength if they do not have knowledge of what they have to perform there is no efficacy in the task. This results in due to their differences we can't come to the conclusion that they are not equally suited for many tasks.
In a similar way, there may be tasks that tell only females can do that. But, if males are willing and interested to do keeping apart from their inferiority, they can also perform. Rather than jumping to conclusions that both are not equally suited for the work if they are given an opportunity they can prove themselves.
Of course, some tell that these can't be done by these fellows and hinder their growth. However, we have to not consider all witty but just depends on whether they have the talent to perform that particular task or not and allot it. Keeping aside their differences in our fellow men, talent and particular knowledge for that task tells us whether they are not suitable or not. Hence, both can be equally suites for any tasks despite their physical differences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ve the same physical strength. Some may be strong and the others may be weak. It d...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e strong and the others may be weak. It doesnt mean that only men are strong compared ...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... results in due to their differences we cant come to the conclusion that they are no...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a similar way" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e not equally suited for many tasks. In a similar way, there may be tasks that tell only fema...
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Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ves. Of course, some tell that these cant be done by these fellows and hinder the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, apart from, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83880597015 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45832449501 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486567164179 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5920597458 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.05 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20071166116 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710113237092 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558847795958 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127976552629 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585109469599 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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