A growing number of people rely on restaurants and convenience food (frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?
These days, determining an optimum eating place is implied to give an essential contribution to the quality of humans’ life. The food industry, recently, has also witnessed an overconsumption regarding ready-made meals. This tendency exerts some beneficial effects on people’s eating habits, however, certain drawbacks are also notable.
Initially, frozen food undeniably is an ideal alternative for home-made meals. With the diversity of packaged meals, people are allowed to order their best-loved dishes which assist them to get rid of the boredom from their daily schedule. Due to its convenience, people are not required to cook or cleanse the dishes, they eventually able to decide when they want to have meals. This may an accurate choice for those who commonly undergo work overload as they are enabled to suitably manage their time. Hence, the overconsumption of convenience food may be accounted for that reason.
Notwithstanding, despite the quoted advantages, overusing packaged meals also give a rise to many worth-minding issues. Typically, frozen food produces many detrimental influences on humans’ health. With the intention to enlarge the revenue, many restaurants and canned food production facilities will lessen budgetary allocations for quality materials. Consequently, the consumers are predicted to suffer many digestion-related ailments owing to the poison originated from those substances. Furthermore, with the same purpose, the food stores normally put an expensive cost on these meals that much higher than home-made ones. Thus, the consumers have to waste a great deal of money on this commodity.
In conclusion, the convenient meals irrefutably entitle people to have a varied menu and prevent from being late, however, it also causes some concerning problems that seriously affect humans’ hereafter life. Therefore, people, in general, had better establish a healthy meal that not abusing packaged food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69759450172 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03492267768 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646048109966 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3725153721 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285659688403 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872867205598 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530293725595 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160155254677 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037239943519 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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