The maps compare the changes of a community center.
The two maps illustrate the transformation in the layout of a community center.
It is clear that the community center underwent a number of changes. The most noticeable change was the expansion of a car park.
In the past, the car park in the west of the maps took up half of the community center's space. After being expanded, it overtook more space previously occupied by a gym and a garden and increased its size into nearly 75% of the whole layout. Along with that, the demolition of a cafe situating in the east made way for the establishment of a reception.
On the other hand, the two meeting rooms locating in the corner on the left side remained at the same location. In addition, The IT room and the Art room, which were adjacent to those meeting rooms, have been resized but not relocated. While the Art room occupied less space, there was an increase in the size of the IT room.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'The' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: The; IT
...ined at the same location. In addition, The IT room and the Art room, which were adjac...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rooms'?
Suggestion: rooms
... the same location. In addition, The IT room and the Art room, which were adjacent t...
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Line 7, column 314, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...e, there was an increase in the size of the IT room.
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Line 7, column 321, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rooms'?
Suggestion: rooms
...e was an increase in the size of the IT room.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53374233129 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56487212332 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625766871166 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0768096208 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1111111111 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215592716643 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102924744253 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129962586492 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177211649359 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128314314806 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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