At present we rely on oil for most of our energy needs. However, oil is a fossil fuel and causes air pollution and it will eventually run out. Nuclear energy is the only practical and cleaner source of energy. Do you agree?
Fossil fuels not only pollute the air but also are fast depleting. Since solar, wind and hydro energy plants failed to accomplish the energy demand, I firmly accord with many energy engineers who believe that only reliable and non-polluting energy source is nuclear.
Most of the alternative sources of energy are considered unreliable because these are not available all the time. Perhaps because solar energy depends upon sunlight, hydro on tides and wind on fast blowing winds, however generating energy from radioactive elements do not require the miracle of nature but the laboratories where heavy metals, like uranium and thorium, can be processed to produce electricity. This is the reason why many people are discouraged to switch to solar and wind power plants despite various commercial and domestic subsidies by the governments. Ergo, out of all the other cleaner sources, nuclear is the only practical one.
Secondly, unlike other energy sources: oil, gas, coal, solar, and biogas, raw materials for nuclear are the least expensive and have highest energy yield. To explain, one tiny radioactive isotope, such as uranium which is abundantly, inexpensively and readily available on the earth, can produce a massive amount of energy. It is been proven that even if we have merely 400 nuclear plants, the energy demand of the entire world can be met. To substantiate further, an extensive study on different energy sources conducted in 2019 by US Energy Administration revealed that nuclear has the highest capacity factor (a factor which accesses the ability to generate power), which is twice more than that of coal and natural gas. Therefore, nuclear is the answer to the unprecedented energy demand of the future.
To sum up, as there are limited fossil fuel reserves and all the other energy substitutes seem un-suitable at the moment, the only option left to quench the energy demand is nuclear.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 965.302439024 170% => OK
No of words: 318.0 196.424390244 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17295597484 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64697136717 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 106.607317073 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588050314465 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 283.868780488 191% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7082692307 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.083333333 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393820180809 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147322072795 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841976239728 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245867804165 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582886818126 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 61.2550243902 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 40.7170731707 231% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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