Compare Hanoi city to Ho Chi Minh city
Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh cities are big cities in Vietnam which are ideal destinations for not only foreign tourists but also domestic tourists. It is very interesting to explore these two cities in order to find out their similarities and their differences. This essay will examine their similarities as well as the differences between them.
In the first place, they share some similarities. Hanoi is quite crowded just like Ho Chi Minh city is. In addition, both of them offer many job opportunities from manual work to intellectual work. As a result, plenty of people have been rushing into these cities to seek for jobs. Moreover, not only Hanoi but also Ho Chi Minh cities are educational, economic and financial centers. Obviously, there is a variety of big shopping malls, famous universities and restaurants in these cities. Another similarity is that they have equal traffic problem, especially traffic congestion in rush hours.
However, they are different in some points. The first difference is their geography. Firstly, Hanoi is located in the North of Vietnam while Ho Chi Minh city is in the South of Vietnam. Secondly, the area of Hanoi is bigger than Ho Chi Minh city. In fact, now Hanoi covers an area of more than 3000 square kilometers whereas the area of Ho Chi Minh city is only about 2000 square kilometers. In terms of population, Hanoi population is estimated about 9 million people but the residents of Ho Chi Minh city is approximate 8 million people. About weather, they are also distinct. Hanoi has four different seasons including spring, summer, autumn and winter with the average annual temperature from 12 to 25 degree Celsius but Ho Chi Minh city only has two seasons which are a wet season and a dry season with the temperature annual average from 25 to 35 degree Celsius.
Another discrepancy between these cities is the culture. Regarding cuisine, the food in Ho Chi Minh city is more spicy and sweeter compared to Hanoi food because the Southern people always use a lot of chilli and sugar to prepare their dishes. The clearly different culture which can be easily realized is night life. Night life in Ho Chi Minh city usually last over midnight; nonetheless, it always finishes before 11 pm in Hanoi. About people, Sai Gon people seem to be more friendly and open-minded than Hanoi people.
In conclusion, there are some similarities between Hanoi and Ho Chi Minh city such as crowded atmosphere, job opportunities, economic development and traffic problem. Besides, these cities also differ in some aspects including the geography and the culture. In my opinion, each of them has its own unique features which attract tourists as well as workers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 714, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Celsius' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Celsiuses'.
Suggestion: Celsiuses
...annual temperature from 12 to 25 degree Celsius but Ho Chi Minh city only has two seaso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97345132743 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67568899801 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502212389381 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.4219000812 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4615384615 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88461538462 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.587570155817 0.244688304435 240% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170904310053 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172300868709 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.356577449288 0.151304729494 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569517569747 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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