Scientist believe that Computer will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is a positive development while others think it is negative development. Discuss both points and give your opinion.
In this present era, there are plenty of new technologies arrived, which makes peoples’ life easy. Especially, the computer will become more advanced than mankind, that is believed by scientists. Few citizens feel it has a positive outcome, whereas others do not support the statement. They think it is a negative development. This essay will explain both aspects and also give my opinion in the following paragraph.
To embarks with, there are numerous benefits of intelligent computers. First and foremost, those types of computer help to complete any work before due date or time, which will save valuable time. Furthermore, computers can do work accurately than man, which means that the margin of error will reduce. For example, since Reliance Industry started using super computerised robots, then that company's productivity and failer both improved. That was written in that company‘s annual report in 2016.
However, using computers in every task is harmful, which create difficulty for people. Firstly, sometimes it is very expensive to maintain computers. That takes almost 30% of income, which will decline the growth of the company. Secondly, if the organization starts to utilize technology in daily work, then that reduces employment. That will generate problems for people and the nation. For instance, The USA using computers in their every work, therefore that nations’ unemployment ratio is higher than other countries.
To conclude, although intelligent computers have some reason for negative development, that has more effective pros than drawbacks. In my honest opinion, I feel it is a positive development, which makes human life smooth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49612403101 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79246283538 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65503875969 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4392707674 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7777777778 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242950110674 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695168083775 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602040133469 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15303058083 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717862021587 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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