The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The pie chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie chart provides the infromation about share percentage of rural and urban poverty in the year 2000. The share of poverty of rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002 in shown in the bar graph.
Overall, it can be oberserved that the share proportion of rural area poverty is high by 76% when compared to urban share of poverty at 24%.
Turing to the bar graph of the rural share of poverty in 1993 ,all the continents have the percentage more than 50% .It is noticed that the East Asia and Pacific has the same proportion of poverty in 1993 and 2002 respectively at 95%.It is noticed that Europe and Central Asia has more poverty in rural area in the year 2002 at 65%.The South Asia has just slight difference of 2% of poverty in the years 1993 and 2002.
In contrast to it, looking at the same bar graph of the rural share of poverty in the year 2002, most of the continents except Europe , Central Asia,East Asia and Pacific have less percentage of poverty in 2002 when compared to the year 1993. 40% is the least percentage of poverty in rural area of Latin America and Caribbean.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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...inents have the percentage more than 50% .It is noticed that the East Asia and Pac...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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...ty in 1993 and 2002 respectively at 95%.It is noticed that Europe and Central Asia...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
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...y in rural area in the year 2002 at 65%.The South Asia has just slight difference o...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...02, most of the continents except Europe , Central Asia,East Asia and Pacific have...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42288557214 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28550475971 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402985074627 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.066391377 43.030603864 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.166666667 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482656719484 0.215688989381 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.322957590447 0.103423049105 312% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10129748437 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377618439713 0.15604864568 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10651762794 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ph of the rural share of poverty in 1993 ,all the continents have the percentage m...
^^
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...inents have the percentage more than 50% .It is noticed that the East Asia and Pac...
^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ents have the percentage more than 50% .It is noticed that the East Asia and Pacif...
^^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...ty in 1993 and 2002 respectively at 95%.It is noticed that Europe and Central Asia...
^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...y in rural area in the year 2002 at 65%.The South Asia has just slight difference o...
^^^
Line 4, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...02, most of the continents except Europe , Central Asia,East Asia and Pacific have...
^^
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , East
... continents except Europe , Central Asia,East Asia and Pacific have less percentage o...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42288557214 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28550475971 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402985074627 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.066391377 43.030603864 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.166666667 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482656719484 0.215688989381 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.322957590447 0.103423049105 312% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10129748437 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377618439713 0.15604864568 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10651762794 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.