Children should always follow their parents advice. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, some parents spend their time for their works however they allocate more time for children this could be because they know that family upbringing always stay in the first stage in children life it is a main substructure.I completely agree with this that children absolutely should their parents advice.
Over the last few decades, children deeply desire to be independent. They long to do what they want. Just it is right or wrong they don't think about this. They imagine that nothing will happen if i do it. That is why we need parents, their life practices as well. If you fell they help you for standing again and they hold you by hand this must not happen again. There is no one in the world who loves, cares and always thinks of children as parents.
The fact of the matter is that now a days in majority of families children are more and more unamenable as well as they don't want to obey their parents. At the end i supposed that when children grew up they will have much more problems with themselves. At that time they remember parents helpful suggestions but then it will be too late. Further nobody could take care of him as parents.
In conclusion, I believe that children are likely to have more problems if they do not follow their parents' advice. So we have chance to more listen our parents suggestions and use these in our future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, well, i suppose, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47773279352 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19910740216 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53036437247 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 247.0 20.2975951904 1217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1106.0 106.682146367 1037% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 247.0 20.7667163134 1189% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 77.0 7.06120827912 1090% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317721435292 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.317721435292 0.084324248473 377% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20363473549 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730517220734 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 123.2 13.0946893788 941% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -162.31 50.2224549098 -323% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 97.3 11.3001002004 861% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.18 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.55 8.58950901804 204% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 100.8 10.1190380762 996% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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